NOVEL NEXT Chapter 9: Disposable Chapter.
Hey guys. Sorry, no updates today. Used today to put the Finishing touches on the last chapter of my first novel, I'm Energy In DC.
Too Tired to finish another today. Tomorrow for sure. Expect it at around 5pm West African Time. Or to be more specific, the time Webnovel resets Powerstones for the week in your country.
I'm telling you this so you don't spend your PS in a hurry.
A higher ranking will really motivate me to create more content.
Remember, your feedback is very important to make this Fic a success. Share with me your thoughts and criticisms. Constructive Criticism I add.
I don't want some guy who isn't having a good day to pour all their frustrations out on me like a dump area just because they don't like what I wrote.
Now, to the true purpose of this Disposable chapter.
I'm Changing the Eye Technique.
No, not the left or right eyes. Those are staying the same.
No, I'm changing the combined effect when both eyes are used in tandem.
From Eikyu Zoshoku, To the New one Kagen Toru.
Why you might ask? Because due to a reader comment, I realized that the combined effect feels more like a new ability entirely than an extension caused by a combination of both eyes.
So I have decided to add something more fitting but just as good. Also, don't worry that the MC will become too overpowered too fast. Appropriate restraints and limits will be added to the Eye Techniques that are plausible and don't make it seem like I'm nerfing him while simultaneously keeping the story in check.
For those of you who may not like the change, I apologize. Hey, I'm only human. And it's better to correct it this early into the story than later on.
I have corrected the ability use and ability explanation in Chaoter 2 and 4 respectively. I didn't change much so there won't be Anything to miss if you don't read it.
But I will still explain it here for those who don't want to reread.
The New ability of the MC is called
Finalized Combined Ability: Kagen Toru (化現奪) – "Manifestation Seizure"
Description:
Kagen Toru is the combined power of the MC's Kagami Utsuchi (Mirror of Earth) in the left eye and Junen no Sōzoku (Ten-Year Creation Continuity) in the right eye. When both eyes are used in unison, they grant the ability to temporarily nullify a target's fundamental ability, rendering them powerless for a set duration.
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I tried as much as possible to make it an extension of both eye abilities. If you still don't like it .... That's your choice cause I ain't changing I again.
Yep, it's like a sealing Technique that seals off any ability of an opponent for a set duration.
The limitations will be explored later on but let's just post some obvious ones here.
The person whose ability will be sealed must be in the MC's line of sight. The sealed ability will consume chakra depending on the strength and chakra capacity of the enemy.
The stronger then enemy and the opponent, the harder and more chakra it consumes to seal the ability away.
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Yep, so that's it. Compare both combined abilities and tell me what you think and which one you would have preferred.
Author out.