Valkyrie's Lament

I realize the status window for the card doesn't tell much, so I changed it around a little bit. Even though in the story there isn't a message that sates she leveled up or anything like that, her Identity card is like a benchmark for how strong or weak she is getting and what she has learned. Also the feature of this card is to identify items that she is given, so far that is the only two function it has for now.

This is the current format I will go with for now on.

Name

Silver Frost

Gender

Female

Average Level

Y-

Race

Human

Body Status

Healthy (Infected)

Age

18

Health

70

Height

5 ft 9’

Mana

110

Weight

124 Ib

Stamina

90

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Strength

5

Agility

7

Vitality

6

Dexterity

9

Intelligence

12

Wisdom

13

Leadership

5

Luck

7

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Magic

None

Abilities

None

Items

Comet (X-), Millionaire Inventory Ring (A)

*This excerpt was added to chapter 2*

Everything else was simple, Health was how much her life was before she dies. Stamina was how long she can keep moving around before she can’t anymore. Mana was magic that she is able to use later on in the game.

Strength and agility was simple and easy to understand. Vitality was her health and defense points that told her how much of a beating that she can take. Dexterity leans in more favor of hand and body coordination, the higher the points the more flexible and accurate one hits and throws. Intelligence and Wisdom both fall under the category for magic, Intelligence adds up the power of one’s magic ability, while Wisdom is the accumulated knowledge of magic itself that transfers to how much magic reservoir one has in oneself.

Anyways, I hope you enjoy the story. I ask, if possible, if you can leave a constructive comment that can help better the story, if not, well I can't do anything about that, but thank you for taking a bit of your time to read the story