Chapter 156: Good 11
The night was long.Though the victory fires still burned, their warmth no longer reached the hearts of Mistshroud's disciples. Whispers spread through the camp like a contagion—rumors of a shadow lord, of Adrian's wound, of a war greater than any of them had dared to imagine.
Elder Laen's face was a stone mask, but his talismans fluttered restlessly around him, their wards dimming and flaring as if reacting to the lingering taint in the air.
Adrian sat apart, arm wrapped in linen that already smoked with faint black threads. The corruption pulsed under his skin like a second heartbeat, every throb daring him to falter.
Storm pressed close, low growls rumbling from deep in his chest. Each crackle of lightning along his fur seemed to burn the mist itself, as though the beast wanted to tear the infection out of his master by force.
Bella broke the silence first."So. We fought a warband. Then we fought their revenant. Now—" her gaze flicked to Adrian's wrapped arm "—we've fought one of their lords."
Her tone was sharp, but her eyes carried the weight of unspoken fear.
Adrian met her gaze. "And we lived."
"That's not the same as winning," Elder Laen said quietly. His voice carried, though it was little more than a whisper. "What came tonight was a test. A shadow's hand reaching from the dark to measure our strength. If Lord Thorne truly wished it, he could have drowned this mountain in silence and left nothing behind."
Murmurs surged again. Some disciples reached for weapons instinctively, as though preparing for another attack that might come at any moment.
Adrian rose to his feet. His body felt heavy, each movement laced with the burn of corruption, but he forced his back straight. "He didn't destroy us. That means he fears us."
Laen's eyes narrowed. "Or he's waiting for you to grow… so you shine brighter before he snuffs you out."
The words cut, but Adrian did not flinch. His hand rested on Storm's mane. The Bound Star pulsed faintly beneath his chest, its light flickering against the shadow in his arm.
Council of Mist and Fire
At dawn, the disciples gathered in the heart of the ruined courtyard. The Mistshroud banners, still tattered, fluttered weakly in the mountain wind.
Laen laid out maps upon a cracked stone table. His finger pressed against a circle of villages along the Ashen Road. "The Dust Order marches along this vein like a disease, consuming every settlement. But this is no longer random slaughter. Their movements align with… something."
Bella leaned forward. "A ritual?"
"Or a weapon," Laen said. His talismans trembled. "The sigils etched into the revenant's summoning were not of mortal design. They echoed the Old Writings—marks forbidden since before the Empire's founding."
A chill rippled through the gathered disciples. The Old Writings were legend, said to be scripts from a time when gods still walked the earth.
Adrian looked down at the map. His jaw tightened. "Then we can't wait for them to finish. We strike first."
Murmurs broke again—some of shock, others of fierce approval.
Bella smirked. "Now you sound like a real sect master."
Laen frowned. "We are few. Every life here is a candle in a storm. To march deeper into Dust territory is to invite the hurricane."
Adrian's corrupted arm throbbed painfully. He clenched his fist to still the tremor. "If we wait, the storm finds us anyway. If we move, we can choose where we bleed."
For a moment, silence. Then Storm gave a low roar, as though lending his voice to Adrian's words.
The Choice
That night, when the council broke apart, Adrian walked alone along the ridgeline. The moon was a thin scar above him, the mist cold against his skin.
The Bound Star beat faintly within him, but its pulse felt strained, muffled by the corruption spreading in his veins. He knew what Laen would not say aloud: if the shadow fire could not be purged, it would one day consume him from within.
Storm padded silently at his side. His glowing eyes met Adrian's, fierce and loyal.
"Legacy of giants," Adrian murmured, staring into the endless dark horizon where Dust Order fires flickered faintly. "If this is what it means to carry it… then I'll burn before I let them take another village."
The beast leaned close, brushing his wing against Adrian's shoulder.
Somewhere far below, on the Ashen Road, another village's bells rang—shrill and desperate.
The Dust Order was already moving again.
Adrian tightened his grip on the Bound Star sigil. His voice was steady, though it trembled with fury.
"Then we march."
Would you like me to write the next chapter as a full battle sequence again (like Ashen Road and the ambush), or would you prefer I make the next one more of a political chapter, where Adrian and Mistshroud first come into contact with the Empire's forces and start to see the bigger war forming?
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Here's the continuation — the next chapter after Adrian's encounter with Lord Thorne:
Chapter: The Wound and the Warning
The campfire shadows flickered across Adrian's face as the healers tried and failed to cleanse the black fire seared into his arm. Every salve hissed and boiled away. Every talisman Laen placed over the wound cracked like brittle glass.
Bella paced like a caged wolf, halberd never far from her hand. "If it spreads, cut it off," she snapped, jaw tight. "Better one arm than his life."
"No," Adrian growled, holding her gaze. His breath was ragged, but his eyes were steady. "If the corruption is bound to Thorne's Sigil, amputation won't stop it. I'll burn before I let his rot stay in me."
Elder Laen's hands trembled as he set aside another broken charm. "This is no ordinary curse. It clings to him because the Bound Star reacted. The shadow seeks to consume what the light rejects."
Storm rumbled low, pacing around the tent, lightning occasionally crackling along his fur as though ready to tear the corruption from Adrian himself.
The silence stretched heavy—until a disciple burst through the tent flaps, panting. "Elders! Riders approach from the south. Not Dust Order—Imperial banners!"
The air froze.
The Empire's Shadow
From the ridgeline, Adrian watched as columns of Imperial cavalry snaked up the mountain road, their armor catching torchlight in dull bronze glimmers. At their head rode a woman in silvered scale, her helm crowned with crimson feathers.
"Laen," Adrian muttered. "Who is she?"
The elder's face tightened. "High Inquisitor Varena. The Emperor's left hand when it comes to rooting out… heresy."
Bella spat. "Which means us."
The Inquisitor raised her gauntlet, and the column halted with military precision. She dismounted, her cloak heavy with embroidered suns—the Empire's crest. Her gaze swept the encampment, pausing only briefly on Adrian before flicking to the disciples, to the beasts, to the wounded.
"You've been busy," Varena said, her voice cool, carrying like steel across stone. "The Ashen Road burns. Dust Order dead by the dozens. Villages whisper of Mistshroud rising again."
Adrian did not flinch. "If you came to lecture, you've climbed far for wasted breath."
Varena's lips curved, not in amusement, but in the faintest acknowledgment. "You misunderstand. The Emperor is… intrigued. He felt the Bound Star's pulse."
At those words, the disciples shifted nervously. Laen bowed slightly, though his eyes stayed wary. "High Inquisitor, with respect, the Dust Order strikes our borders. Do you mean to hinder us, when—"
Varena's gauntlet snapped up, silencing him. "Do not confuse yourselves as free actors. The Bound Star is not yours. It belongs to the Empire."
Her gaze fixed on Adrian like a blade. "You will march south within three days. The Emperor requires your presence in the capital."
Clash of Wills
Bella stepped forward, halberd biting into the ground. "And if we refuse?"
The Imperial soldiers shifted, hands on their hilts, but Varena did not move. Her calm was colder than open threat. "Refusal would be… inconvenient. For you. For your disciples. For these mountains you cling to."
Adrian's wounded arm pulsed, black fire searing against his veins. He hid the wince beneath a breath and locked eyes with the Inquisitor.
"I won't be dragged like a chained hound," he said quietly. "The Dust Order isn't broken. If the Empire wastes time pulling us south, more villages will burn."
For the first time, Varena's mask cracked—just a flicker of disdain, or perhaps pity. "You think you see the whole board. You do not. Shadows spread wider than these hills. Even the Empire… negotiates with them."
Those words struck colder than the mist. Laen paled. Bella swore. Adrian felt the Bound Star flare against his chest, answering rage with rage.
But Varena simply turned, remounting her steed. "Three days," she repeated. "Fail to appear, and the Emperor will consider Mistshroud… an enemy sect."
The cavalry wheeled, their march echoing down the mountain road like the tolling of iron bells.
Aftermath
When the last banner vanished into the mist, Bella broke the silence. "We can't go. It's a trap. They'll chain you, cut the Star out of you, and leave us to rot."
Elder Laen's voice was softer, but more dire. "And if we don't go, the Empire will burn these mountains as surely as the Dust Order. Either way… the sect is caught between giants."
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