The novel Pride and Prejudice.

Chapter 7: Chapter 6: Early Conflicts Jane’s Visit to Netherfield



A cold, damp drizzle fell over Meryton, blurring the outlines of the quaint cottages and muddy roads. Jane Bennet stood at the doorway of Longbourn, neatly wrapped in a pale blue cloak, her bonnet perched delicately on her fair hair. Her beauty, serene and unassuming, was like a beacon that even the dullest skies could not overshadow. Mrs. Bennet, bustling with nervous energy, clung to Jane's arm as though reluctant to let her go.

"My dear, you must impress them," Mrs. Bennet insisted, her voice tinged with desperation. "Mr. Bingley's admiration is obvious, but men are fickle creatures. Show him you are the perfect mistress for Netherfield."

Jane smiled faintly, suppressing the flutter of anxiety in her chest. "Mama, I shall behave as I always do."

Mrs. Bennet waved her off. "Nonsense. Behaving as you always do is what makes you so captivating. Now go, and remember, a little cough might not hurt. It will make him feel protective."

Elizabeth, standing nearby, raised an eyebrow at her mother's antics. "Mama, you cannot orchestrate Jane's romance like you're directing a play."

Mrs. Bennet ignored her sharp-tongued daughter, pushing Jane toward the waiting carriage. The coachman clicked his tongue, and the horses began their slow trot toward Netherfield. Elizabeth watched them depart, her brow furrowing slightly. The weather was worsening, and Jane had always been prone to colds.

The next morning brought confirmation of Elizabeth's fears. A letter arrived from Netherfield in Jane's delicate hand, informing them that she had taken ill and would be staying to recover. Mrs. Bennet, despite her feigned worry, was overjoyed. "What an opportunity! Mr. Bingley will see her in her vulnerability and fall madly in love."

Elizabeth, less enthusiastic about using her sister's health as a romantic ploy, decided to walk to Netherfield to assess Jane's condition herself. The rain from the previous day had left the roads thick with mud, and her skirts were soon drenched and heavy. By the time she reached Netherfield, her cheeks were flushed from exertion, her hair slightly disheveled beneath her bonnet.

She was greeted by a servant, who led her to the sitting room where the Netherfield party had gathered. Caroline Bingley looked up from her embroidery, her perfectly arched brows rising in mild surprise. "Miss Elizabeth Bennet," she said, her tone laced with condescension. "What an unexpected visit."

Elizabeth curtsied, her gaze darting to Darcy, who stood near the window, a book in hand. He acknowledged her with a barely perceptible nod, his expression unreadable. Mr. Bingley, on the other hand, bounded forward with genuine warmth. "Miss Bennet, what a pleasure! Your sister is resting comfortably. I hope this visit doesn't mean you've walked all this way?"

Elizabeth smiled. "It does. I was eager to see Jane and ensure she is well."

Caroline's lips twitched into a smile that did not reach her eyes. "Such devotion. Though one might wonder if it's entirely wise to brave the elements in such a manner."

"Sometimes, Miss Bingley," Elizabeth replied, her tone pleasant but firm, "one must prioritize concern for a loved one over propriety."

Darcy's eyes flickered toward her, a faint trace of admiration crossing his features before he returned his gaze to the book. Elizabeth, however, was too focused on her purpose to notice.

Elizabeth was soon ushered upstairs to Jane's chamber. Her sister lay propped against soft pillows, her cheeks flushed with fever but her smile as gentle as ever. "Lizzy," she murmured, reaching out a hand.

Elizabeth took her hand and sat beside her. "You look dreadful," she teased lightly, though her concern was evident. "But I'm glad to see you're being well cared for."

"Mr. Bingley has been very kind," Jane said, her voice soft but steady. "And his sisters... polite."

Elizabeth refrained from commenting on Caroline Bingley's idea of politeness. Instead, she smoothed Jane's hair back from her forehead. "Rest, dearest. I'll stay for as long as I'm needed."

Downstairs, Elizabeth's arrival became a subject of conversation. Caroline, her irritation barely concealed, remarked, "Such a dramatic gesture, don't you think, Mr. Darcy? Walking through the mud for miles. It seems… excessive."

Darcy closed his book with deliberate slowness, his eyes meeting Caroline's. "Excessive devotion to family is hardly a flaw."

Caroline flushed, turning her attention back to her embroidery. Bingley, ever cheerful, clapped his friend on the back. "Well said, Darcy! I think it speaks volumes about Miss Elizabeth's character."

Darcy said nothing more, but his thoughts were far from silent. Elizabeth's loyalty and determination had unsettled him. She was not like the women of his acquaintance, who sought his favor with calculated charm. There was a fire in her, an authenticity that intrigued him despite himself.

Over the next two days, Elizabeth's presence at Netherfield became a source of both tension and amusement. Caroline's attempts to subtly undermine her were met with Elizabeth's quick wit, often leaving Darcy with an involuntary smile tugging at his lips. Yet, he chastised himself for this unbidden admiration. Her family's lack of wealth and connections, not to mention her spirited defiance of social norms, made her wholly unsuitable.

Elizabeth, for her part, observed Darcy with a mix of curiosity and irritation. His aloofness and occasional cutting remarks grated on her, but she couldn't deny that there was more to him than his haughty exterior. She caught glimpses of warmth in the way he interacted with Bingley and the steadiness with which he responded to Caroline's incessant flattery.

On the third evening, a lively discussion arose during dinner. Caroline, attempting to draw Darcy's attention, asked him to describe his ideal woman. "Surely, Mr. Darcy, you have high standards."

Darcy set his glass down, his gaze resting briefly on Elizabeth before he answered. "A woman of sense and character, who possesses both strength and grace."

Elizabeth arched her brow. "A lofty description. Do you know many women who meet such criteria?"

Darcy's lips curved faintly. "Few, I admit."

Caroline interjected, her tone syrupy sweet. "Perhaps none in this part of the country."

Elizabeth's smile sharpened. "I imagine such women are everywhere, though perhaps they are not always recognized."

Darcy's eyes met hers, a silent challenge passing between them. "Recognition often depends on perspective, Miss Bennet."

The evening ended with Elizabeth retreating to Jane's room, her mind buzzing with the unspoken tension between herself and Darcy. She had come to Netherfield to care for her sister, yet she found herself embroiled in a subtle battle of wits with a man she had sworn to dislike.

By the time Jane was well enough to return home, Elizabeth felt a curious mixture of relief and reluctance. The quiet rivalry with Darcy, though infuriating, had also been invigorating. As the Bennet carriage rolled away from Netherfield, Elizabeth glanced back at the grand estate, wondering if she would ever again spar with its enigmatic master.


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