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The revision of the book one is now posted. Goals for the rewrite: Less whining, more gratitude and determination. Nuri's motivation is no longer to be "the best," but to explore magic and to create with joy. He's anticipating how gaining personal strength will help his friends and family, and is no longer so self-centered.
Books two and three will see a few minor tweaks for continuity and attitude adjustments, but feel free to keep reading since the plot is mostly unchanged. Thank you for your patience as I work to improve this series. Follow to receive a notification when the next chapters go live!
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If you'd like to read the original version of Delicate as Glass, then comment or send me a PM, and I'll reply as soon as I can with reading info. The old opening is pretty bad, which is why you'll see critical comments below. They helped me forge the story into something better, however, so I appreciate them all. Thanks for the honesty!