One Piece: The Matter-Human

This is my first Fan-Fic so I want honest reviews. Tell me about mistakes I make and be honest with me, your hate won't make me not want to write this Fan-Fic. I will do Fan-Fics of other anime, and I'll do an actual Novel when I become confident enough in My writing(As well as when I actually have enough ideas to actually put together a Novel of my own). Next Chapter will be the start of the story so I'll post that and might wait until I finish the first arc to post more chapters. So without further ado, I'll see you in the world of One Piece!