One piece :I open the locks of the heart

I'm writing here to ask for an opinion. I have already written part of the scenario but I would like your opinion on the insertion of another OC with a different system (linked to fallout 4)

Those who are for voting here

Those who are against vote here

the vote will close on 01/12/24 for those who are wondering, the system will be replaced by a devil fruit from my imagination ^^

I would also like to ask if you could rate my story so that it is more highlighted, it motivates me to see the number of readings increase but I appreciate the comments and ratings more, thank you for reading. The next chapter arrives around 2 p.m.