MHA: Crystal Clear

From what I understood, the pace is too fast, which is bad because, as a result, I'm not developing the characters enough, for example Cementos who trained the MC for a while or the interactions with the mother.

And to be honest, I agree when I reread it.

I also have trouble writing action scenes more specifically, fight scenes. If it were a sport, I think I could do it

thank you for your advice.

I don't know when the story will return, but I'll try to improve it. Or else, I'll just improve the first chapters later and continue.