Mc’s not part of the story

1. Is the story interesting? 

2. Did I write a show-not-tell story, especially these recent chapters?

3. What do you expect from this? A bad ending or a satisfying one?

4. Am I fit to write a story?

5. What is the best and worst thing about the MNPOTS?

6. Is my grammar still shitty?

Any answer will be greatly appreciated, I know I'm not good enough but I'm trying my best. Anyway, I'll check this tomorrow since it's already late here in my country.