Broken Realities: What-if

Chapter 16: Announcement: My mistake, 2 options. VOTE plz



So.

I've got at least 2 guys out of, what... 5-6 active guys not satisfied with how I handled chapter 13 and 14. The one with Alex getting bite on his foot and the one how it was handled.

That was a mistake on my part. I should have clarified and made a good description of Alex's appearance and what he was hearing WAYYYY before this point. But since I was bad at it, I just kept pushing it away.

Sorry for that.

But since we're already at this point. I have 2 options.

Cut off the leg -> which means, I will have to scrap what I've thought so far and make new plans. (The more I think about it, the more interesting it gets and ideas are forming in my head). The only downside to this is, I can 100% guarantee that there will be a lot of complaining about readers saying handicapped mc and won't touch this fanfiction even after we've moved on to another simulated fiction world.

OR

Continue with what I have planned. -> Solution for chapter 13-14 would be to rewrite them a little, add a paragraph or two explaining what mc's wearing to make surviving the bite make sense. Which I've added at chapter 15, but its a little too late.

The choice is in your hands.

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